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A girl and a guy went on a date;
Tex-Mex food was what they ate.
They both popped their cherries;
The guy asked will you marry?
The girl told him, yep that’d be great!
Tex-Mex food was what they ate.
They both popped their cherries;
The guy asked will you marry?
The girl told him, yep that’d be great!
4 Comments:
Very cool, and in the best tradition of the beat poet/ story teller.
I feel this needs like a hip jazz beat playing in the background.
Glad you guys liked it. :-)
That's so romantic, I'm filling up!
nice, concise! Not the most romantic scene, but probably more realistic this way.
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