Tuesday, September 27, 2005

Untitled by MHN for Short

A girl and a guy went on a date;
Tex-Mex food was what they ate.

They both popped their cherries;
The guy asked will you marry?

The girl told him, yep that’d be great!

4 Comments:

Blogger Herge Smith said...

Very cool, and in the best tradition of the beat poet/ story teller.

I feel this needs like a hip jazz beat playing in the background.

5:47 PM  
Blogger M said...

Glad you guys liked it. :-)

11:56 AM  
Blogger Sniffy said...

That's so romantic, I'm filling up!

9:57 AM  
Blogger Rowan said...

nice, concise! Not the most romantic scene, but probably more realistic this way.

12:38 PM  

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